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Friday, 16 August 2013

The zoo trip

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

sup it jacob i like how you use your pic and your word keep it up

Anonymous said...

Hi Alazae
I think this haikus poem you have made about the zoo is really awesome.
The only thing you need to work on is making sure that for each of the second sentences for all of the slide have seven syllables thats all.

KEEP UP THE GREAT AND AWESOME WORK

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