An eruption is happening in the jungle what do we do its scary but we need to get somewhere safe before it explodes. If we don’t get out of here quick we will explode with the volcano. Come on as we walked we could smell the liquid from the volcano. If we get somewhere safe we can wait until the volcano errupts.We need to get far far away so we don’t see the volcano but even if we can’t see it we might not know if it won’t come this far.
My name is John Peterson and I'm 21 years old and I came to this island to see all of the lovely animals.
We need to climb up hills and climb trees to see if it will blow up we need to get more than 14 miles if we don’t we use to put our little monkeys in the warm pool nearby the volcano. But I think it would of made that water very hot because we couldn’t go in that water no more. Then when we made it to a small island we had to swim to it and it took a while to get over their but it was worth it.
When we heard the volcano explode we ran and then we thought it was going to hit us but it didn’t we were so lucky it didn't get us but when we went back to our village it was destroyed then one year later it was back to normal but that's when the English come for this island. What will happen next?
2 comments:
Hi Alazae, I really like your blog post! I think you should double check your work to put . and capital letters, keep up the great work!
One thing I love about your blog post is that it was so stocking at some parts and was fun to read.
One thing you could work on next time is finishing it because I want more but on the bright side I think you are a pretty good writer.
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